Book Review & Summary
Visions in a Seer Stone: Joseph Smith and the Making of the Book of Mormon
William L. Davis
University of North Carolina Press, 2020
Abstract
What if the most controversial book in American religious history was also one of the most extraordinary feats of oral performance ever recorded?
In 1829, a young man in rural New York sat down at a table, buried his face in a hat containing a small, dark stone, and proceeded to dictate — word by word, phrase by phrase — a 269,000-word epic spanning a thousand years of ancient history, doctrinal theology, military chronicles, and prophetic sermons. No notes. No manuscript. No corrections. In roughly sixty to ninety working days, Joseph Smith produced the Book of Mormon.
How?
That is the question William L. Davis — scholar of oral tradition, former Latter-day Saint, and unflinching academic — sets out to answer in Visions in a Seer Stone: Joseph Smith and the Making of the Book of Mormon. And his answer is as surprising as the question itself.
Davis is not an apologist. He is not a debunker. He is a historian of oral culture, and what he discovers when he turns those tools on the Book of Mormon is electrifying. Smith was not an ignorant farmhand stumbling into scripture. He was a gifted oral performer, shaped by one of the most intense verbal cultures in American history — the revivalist firestorm of the Burned-Over District, where Methodist preachers thundered before thousands, where lay exhorters memorized and declaimed, and where the art of organized extemporaneous speech was as common as conversation.
Davis identifies the compositional key: an ancient rhetorical technique called “laying down heads” — the practice of fixing an invisible organizing skeleton in the mind, then amplifying it in the living flow of speech. Preachers did it. Lawyers did it. Debaters did it. And Joseph Smith, Davis demonstrates with painstaking textual evidence, did it throughout every layer of the Book of Mormon — its sermons, its prophecies, its chapter headings, its thousand-year narrative arc.
The seer stone was not a magician’s trick. Within the tradition of Western folk magic and esoteric practice, it was a focusing instrument — a means of entering the concentrated creative state in which inspired oral composition became possible.
Visions in a Seer Stone does not tell you what to believe about the Book of Mormon. It tells you something more unsettling and more fascinating: it explains, for the first time with scholarly rigor, precisely how it was made. For believers, skeptics, historians, and anyone who has ever wondered how one man produced a work of such staggering scope in such impossible conditions, this book is essential, revelatory, and impossible to put down.
Chapter-by-Chapter Summary
Overview
Visions in a Seer Stone: Joseph Smith and the Making of the Book of Mormon (UNC Press, 2020) is a scholarly study by William L. Davis, a former Latter-day Saint with a background in oral tradition and folklore studies. Davis does not frame his work as either a defense of or an attack on the Book of Mormon’s authenticity. Instead, he pursues a singular academic question: How did Joseph Smith, face buried in a hat over a seer stone, dictate the entire 269,000-word Book of Mormon to scribes, apparently without notes or manuscript, over a period of roughly sixty to ninety working days in 1829?
Davis answers by situating Smith squarely within the vibrant oral culture of the early American Republic and the Burned-Over District of Western New York. Drawing on theories of oral composition, the homiletical (sermon-craft) traditions of the Second Great Awakening, and close textual analysis of the Book of Mormon itself, Davis argues that Smith was a skilled oral performer who used well-documented compositional techniques — chiefly the ancient and widely practiced method of “laying down heads” — to organize and extemporaneously produce his ambitious epic.
The book is neither apologetics nor polemic. It is a work of intellectual history, performance studies, and textual criticism that takes Smith’s achievement seriously on its own terms.
Preface
Davis opens by disclosing his personal history: he was raised in the LDS faith, the Book of Mormon was the center of his identity, and he eventually withdrew from active participation in his mid-twenties. What drives this book is not religious grievance but scholarly curiosity. Having spent decades reading the text, Davis became preoccupied with a foundational puzzle: by what compositional process did Smith produce a work of such scale and structural complexity while engaged in purely oral dictation?
Because my core beliefs are ultimately anchored in the Book of Mormon, no other text was more important to me, and I dedicated my time and resources to understanding it to the best of my ability.
Davis announces his methodological commitment: to read the Book of Mormon as a product of its oral-cultural moment rather than as either an authentic ancient record or a deliberate fraud. He draws on the field of oral tradition studies — particularly the work of scholars like Walter Ong and John Miles Foley — to analyze how Smith’s compositional techniques mirror those of oral performers across cultures and centuries.
Introduction
The Introduction establishes the central historical puzzle. In 1830, the young American Republic witnessed the publication of the Book of Mormon. Joseph Smith claimed it was a translation of ancient gold plates inscribed in ‘reformed Egyptian,’ retrieved from a hill near his family’s farm in Western New York. But Smith’s translation method was anything but conventional. He did not sit with the plates before him and render their text line by line. Instead, he placed a seer stone in the bottom of an upturned hat, buried his face in the hat to block out all light, and then dictated the entire text to attending scribes — phrase by phrase — at a remarkably steady pace.
Eyewitness testimony consistently describes Smith dictating without notes or reference materials, stopping only to have each phrase repeated back to him for accuracy. The translation sessions proceeded for weeks, with the entirety of the finished text — a complex epic spanning a thousand years of narrative, dozens of named characters, doctrinal sermons, and military histories — flowing from Smith’s mouth in a single sustained oral performance.
Rather than studying the gold plates and writing down translations of the ancient script, Smith dictated the entire work to an attendant scribe in a process of revelatory oral performance.
Davis frames the book’s central thesis: Smith’s seemingly miraculous performance was not miraculous in the pejorative sense of being inexplicable. It was, rather, the product of cultural formation, oral training, and a specific set of compositional techniques that were well understood in Smith’s world — even if they have been largely invisible to subsequent scholars and apologists alike.
Chapter One: Seer Stones and Western Esotericism
Chapter One establishes the physical and cultural context of Smith’s translation method. The seer stone — a smooth, dark rock that Smith placed in his hat — was not an idiosyncratic invention. Davis documents that seer stones were common objects within the tradition of Western esotericism, a broad current of folk magic, divination, and mystical practice that had been flowing through Western culture since the medieval period and was very much alive in early nineteenth-century rural America.
Smith was not the only person in his community who used such stones. He had a documented history as a ‘scryer’ — someone who uses reflective or opaque objects to induce visions — before he ever claimed to find the gold plates. His neighbors were familiar with peep stones, show-stones, and crystal balls as instruments of divination. Davis contextualizes this within the tradition of Western esotericism, tracing the lineage of such objects through Renaissance magic, Paracelsian alchemy, and the broader folk magical world that early American settlers inherited from their European ancestors.
Crucially, Davis argues that the seer stone was not merely a prop. For Smith, it functioned as a genuine instrument of spiritual focusing — a means of entering an altered state of concentrated perception in which verbal composition flowed. The hat, blocking all external light, created a kind of sensory reduction chamber. Within this context, Smith’s reported experience of seeing luminous words or images in the stone is intelligible not as fraud but as a genuine subjective experience shaped by the esoteric tradition in which he was formed.
Taking a mystical ‘seer stone,’ an object in Western esotericism that functioned much like a crystal ball, Smith placed the stone into the bottom of his upturned hat, held the hat to his face to block out all light, and then proceeded to dictate the entire narrative to his attentive scribes.
Davis also examines how Smith later reframed this esoteric apparatus in more respectable biblical terms, relabeling his instruments ‘Urim and Thummim’ — the oracular devices of the ancient Israelite priesthood. This rhetorical move was strategic, distancing the translation process from its folk magical roots and grounding it in scriptural precedent. Davis sees this reframing not as concealment but as a sincere effort to articulate his experience within a more authoritative religious vocabulary.
Chapter Two: Laying Down Heads in Written and Oral Composition
Chapter Two introduces the book’s central analytical concept: ‘laying down heads.’ This is the practice — nearly universal in rhetorical education from classical antiquity through the nineteenth century — of first identifying the main points (or ‘heads’) of a discourse, then amplifying each point extemporaneously in the moment of delivery. Davis traces this method from the classical tradition of invention and arrangement through the educational manuals of early American schoolrooms.
The chapter opens with a close analysis of Smith’s 1832 history — one of the earliest surviving manuscripts in his own hand. Davis shows how this document begins with a skeletal outline of the main points Smith intends to cover, then amplifies each one in sequence. The pattern is unmistakable once identified: Smith consistently articulates his organizing heads first, then expands upon them. This is not the random flow of a storyteller improvising from scratch. It is a structured compositional method with a name and a long pedagogical history.
Smith’s 1832 history begins with an opening paragraph that provides the reader with a sketch outline of the historical events that Smith wished to emphasize in his narrative — a classic demonstration of laying down heads before amplification.
Davis then traces the method’s presence in Smith’s 1843 sermon on the Prodigal Son, where explicit numbered heads govern the organization of the entire discourse. He demonstrates that Smith’s use of this technique was not accidental or idiosyncratic. It was a skill he had developed and refined over years of participation in the oral culture of his community: church meetings, debate societies, lay exhorting, and revivalist preaching.
The larger implication is significant: a person trained in the method of laying down heads could, in principle, dictate a very long and structurally coherent work without written notes — provided that he had prepared his organizing heads in advance and had mastered the art of extemporaneous amplification. Davis will spend the rest of the book showing that this is precisely what Smith did.
Chapter Three: Revival Sermons in the Burned-Over District
Chapter Three situates Joseph Smith within the specific oral culture that formed him: the revivalist preaching world of the Burned-Over District of Western New York during the Second Great Awakening. When the Smith family moved to the Palmyra/Manchester area in the winter of 1816–17, they arrived in one of the most intensively revivalist regions in the United States. Baptist, Methodist, and Presbyterian itinerant preachers swept through the region regularly, delivering fiery sermons to large outdoor crowds.
Davis examines what Smith would have absorbed from this environment. He focuses on three specific areas: Smith’s documented interest in the Methodist faith and his participation as a lay exhorter; the oral training that Methodist class meetings provided to lay speakers; and the specific sermon traditions — particularly the practice of extemporaneous and semi-extemporaneous delivery — that dominated the preaching culture of the era.
Smith would eventually show interest in learning how to preach by joining a Methodist class meeting and participating as an unlicensed lay exhorter — an apprenticeship in oral performance that would prove decisive for his later career.
Davis pays particular attention to the Methodist tradition of the ‘holy conversation’ and the class meeting, which were not merely devotional exercises but training grounds in oral fluency. Lay members were expected to speak publicly, to exhort their fellow believers, to testify to their spiritual experiences, and to handle biblical texts with confidence. This was an apprenticeship in oral performance, and Smith participated in it.
The chapter also examines the broader homiletical culture of the period, including the use of biblical allusion, typological interpretation, and prophetic register in popular preaching. Davis shows how the Book of Mormon’s distinctive idiom — its elevated, archaic, King James English syntax; its prophetic first-person voice; its relentless typological framework — is not anomalous but is deeply continuous with the preaching traditions Smith absorbed in his youth.
Chapter Four: The King Follett Sermon
Chapter Four offers a detailed case study of Smith’s mature oral performance style through an analysis of the King Follett sermon, delivered on 7 April 1844 — less than three months before Smith’s murder at Carthage Jail. The King Follett sermon is the most extensively recorded of all Smith’s discourses, delivered to an estimated audience of eight thousand to twenty thousand people, lasting approximately two hours and fifteen minutes, and running to roughly 6,800 words in its recorded form.
Davis uses this sermon to demonstrate Smith’s sophisticated deployment of the laying-down-heads method in its mature, ‘concealed’ form — meaning that the organizing heads are not explicitly announced to the audience but operate as an invisible skeletal structure underlying the extemporaneous amplification. Smith moves through a sequence of doctrinal propositions — the nature of God, the eternal nature of the human soul, the potential of human beings to progress toward divinity, the comfort available to those who mourn — in a carefully sequenced order that follows a premeditated outline.
Reduced to its essence, Smith’s sermon centered on the potential progress of the human soul in eternity, and how an awareness of that potential could provide comfort to those who were mourning — a theological argument organized through an invisible but coherent series of heads.
Davis also identifies Smith’s characteristic technique of what he calls ‘semi-extemporaneous’ delivery: a mode in which the speaker has prepared the organizing logic of a discourse in advance but amplifies each point in the moment, responding to the energy of the audience and the flow of ideas. This is neither pure improvisation nor reading from a script. It is a skilled middle path that requires both thorough preparation and genuine fluency.
The King Follett sermon reveals the full range of Smith’s oral capabilities: doctrinal exposition, narrative illustration, emotional appeal, humor, prophetic declaration, and pastoral consolation — all woven together within a coherent rhetorical structure. Davis argues that this same range of capabilities, deployed through the same compositional method, produced the Book of Mormon.
Chapter Five: Sermon Culture in the Book of Mormon
Chapter Five turns directly to the Book of Mormon text and demonstrates the pervasive presence of Smith’s oral compositional techniques within it. Davis’s opening statistic is arresting: sermons and sermon-like orations — prophecies, exhortations, doctrinal teachings, scripture quotations with commentary — constitute just over 40 percent of the entire Book of Mormon. Remove them, and the 269,510-word text would shrink by more than 100,000 words.
Davis analyzes how these orations are constructed. The Book of Mormon prophets do not, for the most part, announce their heads explicitly in the manner of Smith’s 1843 Prodigal Son sermon. Rather, they use the ‘concealed heads’ method: an invisible organizing structure that governs the flow of each discourse without being explicitly named. Davis traces this structure through major Book of Mormon sermons — the discourses of Lehi, Nephi, Jacob, Benjamin, Abinadi, Alma, and Moroni — showing how each follows a premeditated but unspoken organizational logic.
He also identifies the characteristic rhetorical moves that recur across these sermons: the use of typological interpretation (reading Old Testament figures as ‘types’ of Christ); the technique of expanding a scriptural quotation through verse-by-verse commentary; the practice of building emotional urgency through a sequence of rhetorical questions; and the deployment of prophetic threats and promises to motivate audiences. All of these are standard features of the revivalist preaching tradition Smith absorbed.
The text of the Book of Mormon reveals how the pervasive sermon culture of Smith’s world had firmly imprinted itself on his imagination, influencing the style, organization, and content of his prophetic voice.
Davis argues that Smith’s production of these extended oral compositions would have required minimal written preparation once the organizational heads were fixed in his mind. A skilled extemporaneous preacher, trained in the method of laying down heads and fluent in the biblical idiom of revivalist preaching, could generate such material in the flow of dictation — especially with the mental focusing effect that the seer-stone ritual appears to have provided.
Chapter Six: Constructing Book of Mormon Historical Narratives
Chapter Six addresses the more demanding compositional challenge that the Book of Mormon presents: not its sermons, which can tolerate a degree of digression and elaboration, but its historical narratives. A thousand-year chronological epic, populated by dozens of named characters, tracking multiple family lineages across multiple generations, managing wars, migrations, and political successions — such a narrative requires far more careful preparation than a sermon. You cannot simply extemporize your way through a plot without risking irreparable inconsistencies.
Davis shows that Smith met this challenge through a more elaborate and visible deployment of the laying-down-heads method for narrative organization. He begins with a striking observation: the Book of Mormon opens not with the famous line ‘I, Nephi, having been born of goodly parents,’ but with a detailed chapter heading that functions as a narrative outline — a sequential list of the main plot events that the ensuing text will amplify. This is the laying-down-heads method made explicit and placed at the macro-structural level of the entire work.
Smith puts his explicit method of laying down heads on open display throughout the text, beginning with the opening chapter of the work — using the chapter headings themselves as his organizing skeleton before amplifying each point in the narrative body.
Davis traces this pattern throughout the Book of Mormon, showing how the chapter headings consistently function as premeditated outlines that the narrative body then amplifies. He also examines how Smith manages the challenge of maintaining consistency across the thousand-year timeline, arguing that Smith prepared a mental or rough written map of the major narrative arcs before beginning dictation — and that the visible structure of the text preserves the traces of this preparation.
The chapter also addresses the question of sources. Davis acknowledges that the Book of Mormon draws extensively on the King James Bible and argues that Smith’s deep familiarity with biblical narrative patterns provided him with a ready repertoire of story structures, character types, and plot templates from which to construct his own epic. The Exodus narrative, the prophetic call narrative, the conquest narrative, and the court narrative — all appear in the Book of Mormon in more or less recognizable form. This is not plagiarism but the standard practice of an oral performer working within a rich inherited tradition.
Chapter Seven: A Theory of Translation
Chapter Seven synthesizes the book’s findings into a comprehensive theory of how the Book of Mormon was produced. Davis is careful to frame this theory in terms that can be engaged by both believers and skeptics. He begins by acknowledging that Smith himself sincerely believed, to one degree or another, that his process involved divine inspiration and guidance. Davis does not set out to disprove this belief. He sets out to describe the human process that Smith’s belief animated and through which it expressed itself.
Davis proposes that Smith’s ‘translation’ was not translation in the conventional sense — the rendering of an existing text in a foreign language into a target language. Rather, it was a process of inspired composition: Smith used the ritual of the seer stone and hat to enter a focused creative state, and within that state, drawing on his deep immersion in biblical language, revivalist preaching traditions, and the organizing method of laying down heads, he composed the Book of Mormon as an act of what he experienced as divine dictation.
This chapter proposes an explanation of Smith’s translation that offers a framework for both believers and nonbelievers to account for the production of the Book of Mormon, while also accommodating and carefully reflecting on the textual and historical evidence.
Davis draws on the concept of ‘trance composition’ in oral tradition studies — the phenomenon, documented in many cultures, in which skilled oral performers enter altered states that they experience as divine possession or inspiration, and in which they produce performances of quality and coherence that exceed what they could generate in their normal waking state. He does not reduce Smith’s experience to pathology; he takes it seriously as a genuine phenomenon of oral culture.
The theory accounts for several puzzling features of the Book of Mormon’s production: the steady pace of dictation; the apparent lack of revision; the consistency of the narrative structure despite the complexity of the content; the distinctive but internally coherent pseudo-archaic English idiom; and Smith’s own genuine conviction that he was not composing but receiving. Davis suggests that for Smith, the distinction between ‘composing’ and ‘translating’ may have been genuinely unclear — and that this ambiguity was not dishonesty but a feature of his subjective experience of the creative process.
Epilogue
The Epilogue steps back to assess what this study has and has not accomplished. Davis acknowledges that the book leaves important questions unanswered. He has focused on sermon culture and the method of laying down heads, but the full oral culture of early America was much richer than this. Storytelling traditions, memory techniques, the role of communal oral reading, the dynamics of call-and-response in revivalist settings, the influence of Masonic ritual and its structured oral performances — all of these contributed to the cultural formation of Joseph Smith and deserve their own investigations.
Davis reaffirms his core conclusion: Smith was a product of an intensely oral culture in which extemporaneous composition of extended discourses was not a remarkable achievement but a normal expectation of public life. Ministers, lawyers, politicians, debaters, and storytellers all operated in this world, and they developed sophisticated techniques for managing the demands of extended oral performance. Smith learned these techniques, internalized them, and then deployed them — amplified by his genuine religious conviction and the focusing ritual of the seer stone — to produce one of the most unusual and consequential works of American religious history.
Smith’s oral composition of the Book of Mormon occurred in a time and place where people regularly gathered together around firesides at home and in public spaces… to tell stories, exchange news, participate in communal readings, deliver memorized and semi-extemporaneous recitations, engage in political discourse, barter, and debate.
Davis closes with a call for continued scholarship that takes the Book of Mormon seriously as a text — neither dismissing it as transparent fraud nor accepting it as an ancient document immune to critical analysis. He envisions a future study of the Book of Mormon that is fully integrated into the academic study of American literature, oral tradition, and religious history. In his reading, the Book of Mormon is a genuinely remarkable achievement of oral composition, whatever one concludes about its ultimate origins.
Analytical Conclusion: Significance for Apologists and Critics
Davis’s study is methodologically sophisticated and deliberately neutral in its theological conclusions. For the Christian apologist examining LDS truth claims, however, several of Davis’s findings carry significant implications worth noting:
First, Davis thoroughly dismantles the LDS apologetic argument that the Book of Mormon’s complexity and internal consistency are inexplicable without divine authorship. He demonstrates, with careful documentation, that Smith possessed all the cultural, rhetorical, and compositional resources necessary to produce such a work through skilled human oral performance. The ‘it couldn’t have been done without God’ argument is substantially weakened by Davis’s analysis.
Second, Davis’s account of Smith’s use of seer stones within the tradition of Western folk magic — and his later reframing of those instruments in more respectable biblical language — supports the view that Smith was a skilled cultural adapter who shaped his public presentation strategically. The rebranding of the peep stone as ‘Urim and Thummim’ is documented and deliberate.
Third, Davis’s theory of ‘inspired composition’ — while respectful of Smith’s subjective experience — does not require any engagement with an actual ancient record. The gold plates, on Davis’s account, may have played no functional role in the production of the text. Smith’s face was in the hat, not on the plates. The text came from within Smith’s own culturally formed imagination; he experienced that process.
Finally, Davis’s work is a reminder that serious academic scholarship on the Book of Mormon is neither apologetics nor debunking but a third option: the patient, rigorous application of the tools of literary and historical analysis to a genuinely complex text. For those engaged in LDS evangelism and apologetics, Davis is essential reading — both for what it reveals about Smith’s methods and for the kind of evidence-based, culturally grounded argument it models.
LDS Apologist Reviews:
Visions in a Seer Stone: Joseph Smith and the Making of the Book of Mormon
A Critical Survey with Christian Rebuttals
Introduction: A Cleverly Framed Naturalistic Case
William L. Davis, an independent scholar with a Ph.D. in Theater and Performance Studies from UCLA, published Visions in a Seer Stone: Joseph Smith and the Making of the Book of Mormon through the University of North Carolina Press in 2020. Davis, a former Latter-day Saint himself, presents what he calls a culturally grounded theory for how Joseph Smith produced the Book of Mormon without supernatural assistance — namely, that Smith was a skilled oral performer who drew on nineteenth-century sermon culture, mnemonic techniques, and a compositional method known as “laying down heads” to dictate the text over roughly three months in 1829.
The book has garnered considerable attention both within mainstream academic circles and among LDS-affiliated apologists, particularly from the Interpreter Foundation, which describes itself as dedicated to “supporting the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints through scholarship.” The LDS apologetic reviews are of particular interest to Christian researchers and evangelists, for they reveal how believing scholars attempt to absorb, redirect, or minimize scholarship that — despite Davis’s diplomatic framing — strongly implies that Joseph Smith fabricated the Book of Mormon.
This essay surveys the most significant LDS apologist reviews of Visions in a Seer Stone, with concise Christian rebuttals to each major line of argument. The reviewing voices include Brian C. Hales and Brant A. Gardner (both from the Interpreter Foundation), as well as commentary from the Dialogue Journal roundtable and the Association for Mormon Letters.
Section 1: The Interpreter Foundation’s Reception
The Interpreter Foundation published two reviews of Davis’s book in its journal, Interpreter: A Journal of Latter-day Saint Faith and Scholarship, in Volume 39 (2020). The two reviewers were Brian C. Hales, a prominent LDS scholar on Joseph Smith and polygamy, and Brant A. Gardner, a Mesoamerican-Book of Mormon scholar. Their approaches differ in important ways, but both attempt to retain the possibility of divine origin while engaging Davis’s secular argument.
1.1 Brian C. Hales: “Theories and Assumptions”
Source: https://journal.interpreterfoundation.org/theories-and-assumptions-a-review-of-william-l-daviss-visions-in-a-seer-stone/
Summary of Hales’s Position
Brian C. Hales’s lengthy review — spanning pages 151–190 in the journal — is the most detailed LDS apologetic engagement with Davis’s thesis. Hales acknowledges that Visions in a Seer Stone is the most detailed secular explanation ever produced for the Book of Mormon’s origin. He even calls it “groundbreaking.” But his critique zeros in on what he identifies as Davis’s fundamental methodological problem: building a plausible-sounding theory on a tower of unsupported assumptions.
Key Apologist Claims and Quotes
“The primary weaknesses of the theory involve the type and quantity of assumptions routinely accepted throughout the book. The assumptions include beliefs that the historical record does not support or even contradicts (e.g. Smith’s 1829 superior intelligence, advanced composition abilities, and exceptional memorization proficiency) and those that describe Smith using oral performance skills beyond those previously demonstrated as humanly possible.”
— Brian C. Hales, “Theories and Assumptions,” Interpreter: A Journal of Latter-day Saint Faith and Scholarship, Vol. 39 (2020), p. 151
Hales identifies what he calls the circular logic long embedded in naturalistic Book of Mormon theories: “If asked, ‘What skills would be needed to dictate a book like the Book of Mormon?’ The answer has been, ‘The skills Joseph Smith possessed in 1829.’ If asked, ‘What skills did Joseph Smith possess in 1829?’ The answer has been, ‘All the skills needed to dictate the Book of Mormon.’” He acknowledges that Davis’s contribution is to at least attempt to break out of this circularity by naming specific skills. But Hales argues that even these named skills — the ability to dictate thousands of refined first-draft sentences from memory, consistent with sophisticated oral techniques — exceed what has ever been humanly demonstrated.
Crucially, Hales points out that the historical record offers no corroboration for Davis’s portrait of Smith as a secretly-trained oral performer. Drawing on historian Richard Bushman, Hales notes:
“Richard Bushman reports that Joseph Smith “is not known to have preached a sermon before the Church is organized in 1830. He had no reputation as a preacher.” If Joseph spent the thousands of hours composing a book and practicing for an oral performance as VSS describes, he must have been extremely secretive. Any such behavior would probably have been recalled by critics in the years immediately after the publication of the Book of Mormon.”
— Brian C. Hales, “Theories and Assumptions,” Interpreter, Vol. 39 (2020), p. 188
Hales also draws attention to the fact that numerous contemporary witnesses who knew the Smith family personally — including the twenty-two individuals whose statements Eber D. Howe recorded in 1834 and the fourteen testimonies Arthur Deming collected in 1888 — describe Joseph in unflattering terms, but not once as a gifted orator, storyteller, or mnemonic performer.
Christian Rebuttal
► Christian Rebuttal: Hales’s critique is actually useful to the Christian apologist, because it essentially concedes that Davis’s naturalistic explanation requires abilities in Smith that the historical record does not support. From a biblical perspective, this matters enormously: if you cannot explain the Book of Mormon naturally, and you have already rejected the supernatural (since Mormonism’s God and gospel are incompatible with the God of the Bible), you are left with a document that defies explanation on secular grounds. For the Christian, the far simpler explanation is fraud: Joseph Smith was a known treasure-digger, folk-magician, and con man (as documented even by his 1826 court conviction) who fabricated a religious text. No superhuman oral performance skill was required — just deception. Davis’s failure to produce a plausible natural explanation does not rescue LDS truth claims; it simply adds another failed theory to the pile.
1.2 Brant A. Gardner: “Oral Creation and the Dictation of the Book of Mormon”
Source: https://journal.interpreterfoundation.org/oral-creation-and-the-dictation-of-the-book-of-mormon/
Summary of Gardner’s Position
Brant Gardner, known primarily for his multi-volume LDS apologetic commentary on the Book of Mormon, took a more theologically protective approach in his review. While he acknowledges Davis’s genuine contribution to understanding early American oral culture and its relationship to the Book of Mormon’s structure, Gardner focuses on a disconnect he perceives at the heart of Davis’s thesis: the failure to coherently connect the seer stone mythology with the oral composition theory.
Key Apologist Claims and Quotes
“That tenuous tie between folk magic and the Seeker movement is crucial to his thesis that the seer stones were involved in the process of the generation of a text that attempted to answer those questions. What is missing is any indication of how the concepts surrounding the use of a seer stone would lead to such connections. Thus, there is a disconnect between the method and the extended oral performance that is not addressed.”
— Brant A. Gardner, “Oral Creation and the Dictation of the Book of Mormon,” Interpreter: A Journal of Latter-day Saint Faith and Scholarship, Vol. 39 (2020), p. 193
Gardner’s point is pointed: even if Davis establishes that nineteenth-century oral techniques are visible in the Book of Mormon, he never satisfactorily explains how those techniques connect to the seer stone apparatus. Why would a folk-magic stone be the instrument of a carefully pre-planned oral performance? Davis’s title implies the seer stone was central, yet the stone’s role in the text itself is marginal, occupying only roughly 20 of the book’s nearly 200 pages of actual content.
Gardner ultimately evaluates Davis’s work as a new contribution that “may have been created” through the mechanisms Davis describes, but does not accept this as the definitive account. As a believing LDS member, Gardner views the work charitably but ultimately sees it as incomplete — an interesting academic lens that does not threaten, in his view, the reality of divine intervention.
Christian Rebuttal
► Christian Rebuttal: Gardner inadvertently does the Christian apologist a great service by highlighting the internal incoherence of Davis’s thesis. The seer stone — which Smith literally buried his face in a hat to use — is an occult instrument from Smith’s treasure-digging years, a fact the LDS Church itself has only recently acknowledged after long denial. That the same stone used in money-digging scams would become the instrument of divine revelation is itself a profound theological problem for Latter-day Saints. Gardner’s frustration that Davis cannot bridge the gap between folk magic and oral performance actually exposes a deeper problem: the entire LDS narrative about translation is incoherent. The seer stone belongs in a court of law, not a theology of divine scripture.
Section 2: The Dialogue Journal Roundtable
Source: https://www.dialoguejournal.com/diablogue/dialogue-roundtable-william-l-davis-visions-in-a-seer-stone-joseph-smith-and-the-making-of-the-book-of-mormon/
Dialogue: A Journal of Mormon Thought — a more liberal and independent Mormon publication — convened a roundtable of reviews that included responses from scholars Elizabeth Fenton (University of Vermont) and Michael Austin (University of Evansville). While neither is a strict apologist in the traditional LDS sense, both engage Davis’s work from within Mormon studies, and their comments have been absorbed and cited within LDS apologetic circles as evidence that Davis’s work is compatible with believing scholarship.
2.1 Michael Austin: “Visions in a Seer Stone and the Way Forward for Book of Mormon Studies”
Summary of Austin’s Position
Michael Austin is an English professor and a Latter-day Saint intellectual. His review is arguably the most enthusiastic of the academic assessments of Davis’s work, and represents the more progressive wing of LDS thought that is willing to embrace oral-performance theories as enriching rather than threatening. Austin frames Davis’s central observation as “utterly uncontroversial” — that the Book of Mormon was spoken, not written — and uses it to launch an expansive defense of Davis’s scholarly contribution.
Key Apologist Claims and Quotes
“He makes an utterly uncontroversial observation about the Book of Mormon’s origin and uses it to support a series of insightful, original claims about the way that the Book of Mormon can and should be read. The book’s central observation is that Joseph Smith did not write the original text of the Book of Mormon; he spoke it, and other people wrote it down. LDS children learn this in Primary, and both devout believers and strident critics accept it as historical fact.”
— Michael Austin, Dialogue Roundtable Review, Dialogue Journal (2020), dialougejournal.com
Austin is particularly enthusiastic about Davis’s potential to reframe Book of Mormon studies, comparing the text to the Iliad, Beowulf, and Paradise Lost as a great oral epic. He writes with apparent satisfaction:
“Like some of the most significant texts in the world’s history — The Iliad, The Ramayana, Sundiata, Beowulf — The Book of Mormon began its English-language life as an oral narrative. Nobody doubts this fact, but few of us have really considered its implications the way that Davis has.”
— Michael Austin, Dialogue Roundtable Review, Dialogue Journal (2020)
Christian Rebuttal
► Christian Rebuttal: Austin’s comparison of the Book of Mormon to the Iliad or Beowulf is rhetorically dazzling but logically evasive. Those works are acknowledged human literary products from ancient oral traditions — nobody claims divine authorship for them. Comparing the Book of Mormon to them is actually damning by association: it implicitly concedes that the Book of Mormon is a human oral performance, not a divine translation of ancient golden plates. Furthermore, Austin’s claim that the observation is “utterly uncontroversial” sidesteps the critical question: if Smith spoke it, where did the content come from? Oral doesn’t mean ancient. It means Smith made it up while talking. The Bible, by contrast, explicitly distinguishes prophetic utterance from human invention (2 Peter 1:20–21). The Holy Spirit moved human authors; it did not move Joseph Smith’s theatrical imagination.
2.2 Elizabeth Fenton: “Taking Seriously the Book of Mormon’s Status as a Performance”
Summary of Fenton’s Position
Elizabeth Fenton, a scholar of American religious literature, praises Davis’s methodology while gently noting his reluctance to draw firm conclusions about historicity. Her review is more analytical than devotional, but she operates from within a framework that grants the Book of Mormon significant cultural and literary legitimacy. She highlights Davis’s attention to the compositional technique of “laying down heads,” noting a passage in which Nephi commands Jacob to “engraven the heads of them upon these plates.”
Key Apologist Claims and Quotes
“Davis argues, I think rightly, that Smith’s contemporaries “would have immediately recognized Nephi’s instruction as an everyday technique of contemporary composition, expansion, and declamation.” But rather than offer a facile reading of this moment that simply locates the Book of Mormon in the nineteenth century, Davis suggests that an awareness of Smith’s use of this and other techniques reveals the rich confluence of religious cultures into and out of which the book emerged.”
— Elizabeth Fenton, Dialogue Roundtable Review, Dialogue Journal (2020), dialoguejournal.com
Fenton is more careful than Austin to acknowledge what the evidence actually implies: when nineteenth-century oral techniques are “immediately recognized” by Smith’s contemporaries in a text supposedly translated from ancient golden plates, the most natural reading is that a nineteenth-century man produced it.
Christian Rebuttal
► Christian Rebuttal: Fenton’s academic carefulness accidentally makes the Christian apologist’s case. When she notes that nineteenth-century readers would have immediately recognized familiar compositional techniques in the Book of Mormon, she is confirming what critics of Mormonism have argued for nearly two centuries: the Book of Mormon is a product of its time and place, not an ancient Semitic text translated through divine power. The presence of 1820s American sermon techniques in a book supposedly written between 600 BC and 400 AD is not a minor cultural curiosity — it is a smoking gun. As Galatians 1:8 warns, even an angel declaring a different gospel is to be rejected. The Book of Mormon’s anachronistic nineteeth-century fingerprints are not signs of divine condescension; they are evidence of human fabrication.
Section 3: The Association for Mormon Letters Reviews
Source — Hamilton Review: https://www.associationmormonletters.org/reviews/older-reviews/davis-visions-in-a-seer-stone-joseph-smith-and-the-making-of-the-book-of-mormon-reviewed-by-andrew-hamilton/
Source — Champenois & Angulo: https://www.associationmormonletters.org/2020/07/roundtable-reviews-william-l-davis-visions-in-a-seer-stone-joseph-smith-and-the-making-of-the-book-of-mormon/
3.1 Andrew Hamilton: A Careful Believer’s Appreciation
Summary of Hamilton’s Position
Andrew Hamilton reviewed the book for the Association for Mormon Letters, offering a warm but thoughtful endorsement. Hamilton is a believing Latter-day Saint who reads Davis’s work appreciatively while noting that the book’s title is misleading — the seer stone is discussed in only roughly 20 of 196 pages of text, despite being the book’s marquee concept.
Key Apologist Claims and Quotes
“Seer stones are the focus of approximately 20 of the book’s 196 pages of text. Most of the rest of the book focuses on Smith’s use of the oral culture of his day to compose the Book of Mormon. Calling the book “Visions in a Seer Stone” when the discussion of seer stone use makes up about 10% of the text feels a bit like going to a feature film called “Batman” where Batman is only in the film for ten minutes.”
— Andrew Hamilton, Association for Mormon Letters (2020), associationmormonletters.org
Hamilton ultimately recommends the book to members but suggests that believing Latter-day Saints first read Brant Gardner’s The Gift and Power: Translating the Book of Mormon, calling Gardner’s work more suitable for “easing believing members away from traditional assumptions about the Book of Mormon’s translation into more fruitful avenues — and does so from a faith-affirming perspective.”
Christian Rebuttal
► Christian Rebuttal: Hamilton’s candid admission that the book’s title is a bait-and-switch is telling. The seer stone — the instrument through which Smith claimed to receive divine words — is pushed to the periphery of a book named after it, because a sustained examination of that instrument’s occult origins is not something LDS apologists want to dwell on. The seer stone is the same object Smith used in treasure-seeking operations for which he was tried in 1826 under New York’s Glass-looker statute. That this instrument of fraud became the supposed vehicle of divine scripture is a problem no LDS apologist, progressive or conservative, has ever resolved. The stone doesn’t need less attention; it needs far more.
3.2 Christopher Angulo and Erik Champenois: Roundtable Notes
Summary of Their Positions
Christopher Angulo and Erik Champenois provided shorter roundtable responses for the Association for Mormon Letters. Champenois offered the most enthusiastic endorsement of any LDS-affiliated reviewer, calling the book “a groundbreaking book on the making of the Book of Mormon.” Angulo was more measured, noting a key logical problem in Davis’s thesis: the oral techniques visible in the Book of Mormon are more consistently evident in the book itself than in Smith’s later sermons — which is the reverse of what we would expect if Smith had developed those skills before dictating the Book of Mormon.
Key Apologist Claims and Quotes
“It appears more likely that Smith would have picked up these oratorical techniques from writing (translation process) and re-writing (printer’s manuscript preparation) the Book of Mormon, than from any of the possible sources Davis names. To me, it is far less likely that Smith would start off skilled in the techniques, but then lose the skill over the course of his 15 year ministry when he was actually preaching frequently to congregations.”
— Christopher Angulo, Association for Mormon Letters Roundtable (2020), associationmormonletters.org
Christian Rebuttal
► Christian Rebuttal: Angulo’s observation is quietly devastating. If Smith truly mastered these oral compositional techniques before 1829, why did they not appear consistently in his post-1829 preaching? The most parsimonious explanation is that the techniques were not Smith’s at all — they were simply present in a text he fabricated (or plagiarized in part), and his own subsequent sermons did not replicate them because he was working from no such prepared oral architecture. Angulo’s alternative — that Smith picked up the techniques while dictating the Book of Mormon — is actually a concession that the text shaped Smith, which inverts Davis’s entire argument. For the Christian, neither explanation helps the LDS cause: either Smith concocted a sophisticated fraudulent performance, or the text’s internal consistency reflects sources other than Smith’s native genius.
Section 4: The “Barnacles of Faith” Controversy
One of the most revealing episodes in the reception of Visions in a Seer Stone among LDS apologists involves Davis’s use of the phrase “barnacles of faith.” Davis employs this term to describe non-doctrinal theories about the Book of Mormon’s translation that have, in his view, ossified into quasi-official positions within LDS discourse, shutting down comprehensive inquiry. The phrase provoked considerable irritation among believing LDS readers and apologists.
The LDS Reaction
“Of course, this pejorative phrase “barnacles of faith” will invite criticism from some Book of Mormon apologists who will surely not shy away from using the phrase negatively for their own purposes in critiquing Visions.”
— Michael Austin, Dialogue Roundtable Review, Dialogue Journal (2020), dialoguejournal.com
Even within the pages of the Interpreter Foundation’s own comment sections, anonymous readers pushed back fiercely, arguing that Davis’s secular framework had no place in a journal aimed at “believers,” and that the premise of the volume was “so ahistorical that it boggles the mind.”
Christian Rebuttal
► Christian Rebuttal: Ironically, Davis’s “barnacles of faith” metaphor is one of the more honest observations in his book. It captures something genuine about the LDS apologetics industry: when the evidence goes against official narratives, the narrative gets revised, re-interpreted, or supplemented with new unofficial theories that gradually harden into orthodoxy. The LDS response to Book of Abraham problems, DNA evidence against Amerindian Hebrew origins, anachronistic animals and plants, and the Kinderhook Plates all follow the same pattern. Davis’s barnacles are simply the latest layer. From a biblical standpoint, truth does not accumulate barnacles; it stands or falls on its own testimony and evidence (John 17:17; Isaiah 8:20).
Section 5: What the LDS Apologetic Reviews Concede — and Why It Matters
Taken together, the LDS apologetic reviews of Visions in a Seer Stone — even those from the most committed defenders of the faith — concede a remarkable amount:
① The Book of Mormon contains pervasive nineteenth-century material — content and structural features that are anachronistic to any claimed ancient Semitic origin. This is now acknowledged even by conservative LDS scholars.
② The seer stone used in the “translation” was the same instrument used in Joseph Smith’s treasure-seeking enterprises, and its connection to the text production remains theologically and historically unresolved.
③ No historical witness described Smith as a skilled oral performer, mnemonic artist, or storyteller prior to 1829 — despite Davis’s theory requiring exactly that.
④ Davis’s secular theory, even if incomplete, is described as the most detailed and sophisticated naturalistic explanation for the Book of Mormon’s origin ever produced — suggesting the bar for such explanations has never been high.
⑤ LDS apologists themselves admit they cannot fully rebut Davis’s linguistic and structural analysis; they can only question his conclusions.
For the Christian apologist, these concessions are more significant than the rebuttals. The LDS apologetics community, for all its scholarship, cannot produce a coherent and evidence-supported account of how the Book of Mormon came to be — either naturally or supernaturally. Davis’s book did not intend to help the Christian case, but it has inadvertently strengthened it.
Conclusion: The Real Verdict on Visions in a Seer Stone
William Davis’s Visions in a Seer Stone is, in many ways, a well-researched book that illuminates the oral culture of early nineteenth-century America. Its scholarly apparatus is genuine, its engagement with the text is close, and its documentation of the “laying down heads” technique is valuable to any student of American religious history. But as an explanation for the Book of Mormon’s origin, it fails on its own terms — as even LDS apologists acknowledge.
The key theological question is not “How could Joseph Smith have produced the Book of Mormon naturally?” That question assumes the Book of Mormon requires explaining. The prior question is: “Is the Book of Mormon what it claims to be?” The answer, based on archaeology, linguistics, DNA evidence, internal anachronisms, and the documented history of Joseph Smith, is no.
No nineteenth-century oral performance theory, however sophisticated, rescues a book that claims to describe real people on a real American continent speaking real ancient Hebrew, worshipping in real temples, and traveling with horses, steel, wheat, and chariots that simply did not exist in pre-Columbian America. The Book of Mormon is not a great oral performance. It is a great deception.
And the Bible has clear words for that (Galatians 1:6–9; Deuteronomy 18:20–22; Revelation 22:18).
Galatians 1:6-9: I marvel that ye are so soon removed from him that called you into the grace of Christ unto another gospel: Which is not another; but there be some that trouble you, and would pervert the gospel of Christ. But though we, or an angel from heaven, preach any other gospel unto you than that which we have preached unto you, let him be accursed. As we said before, so say I now again, if any man preach any other gospel unto you than that ye have received, let him be accursed.
Deuteronomy 18:20-22: But the prophet, which shall presume to speak a word in my name, which I have not commanded him to speak, or that shall speak in the name of other gods, even that prophet shall die. And if thou say in thine heart, How shall we know the word which the Lord hath not spoken? When a prophet speaketh in the name of the Lord, if the thing follow not, nor come to pass, that is the thing which the Lord hath not spoken, but the prophet hath spoken it presumptuously: thou shalt not be afraid of him.
Revelation 22:18: For I testify unto every man that heareth the words of the prophecy of this book, If any man shall add unto these things, God shall add unto him the plagues that are written in this book.
Key Sources Reviewed in This Essay
• Brian C. Hales, “Theories and Assumptions: A Review of William L. Davis’s Visions in a Seer Stone,” Interpreter: A Journal of Latter-day Saint Faith and Scholarship, Vol. 39 (2020), pp. 151–190. https://journal.interpreterfoundation.org/theories-and-assumptions-a-review-of-william-l-daviss-visions-in-a-seer-stone/
• Brant A. Gardner, “Oral Creation and the Dictation of the Book of Mormon,” Interpreter: A Journal of Latter-day Saint Faith and Scholarship, Vol. 39 (2020), pp. 191–206. https://journal.interpreterfoundation.org/oral-creation-and-the-dictation-of-the-book-of-mormon/
• Michael Austin, “Visions in a Seer Stone and the Way Forward for Book of Mormon Studies,” Dialogue Journal Roundtable (2020). https://www.dialoguejournal.com/diablogue/dialogue-roundtable-william-l-davis-visions-in-a-seer-stone-joseph-smith-and-the-making-of-the-book-of-mormon/
• Elizabeth Fenton, “Taking Seriously the Book of Mormon’s Status as a Performance,” Dialogue Journal Roundtable (2020). https://www.dialoguejournal.com/diablogue/dialogue-roundtable-william-l-davis-visions-in-a-seer-stone-joseph-smith-and-the-making-of-the-book-of-mormon/
• Andrew Hamilton, Review of Visions in a Seer Stone, Association for Mormon Letters (2020). https://www.associationmormonletters.org/reviews/older-reviews/davis-visions-in-a-seer-stone-joseph-smith-and-the-making-of-the-book-of-mormon-reviewed-by-andrew-hamilton/
• Erik Champenois and Christopher Angulo, Roundtable Reviews, Association for Mormon Letters (2020). https://www.associationmormonletters.org/2020/07/roundtable-reviews-william-l-davis-visions-in-a-seer-stone-joseph-smith-and-the-making-of-the-book-of-mormon/
• William L. Davis, Visions in a Seer Stone: Joseph Smith and the Making of the Book of Mormon, University of North Carolina Press, 2020. ISBN: 9781469655666. (PDF)
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